新东方网雅思频道邀请特约作者薛鹏教员大家分享首创雅思写作语料库系列文章,协助考生思绪拓展,积聚精彩写作语料。  

  【安康类

  Staying healthy by playing sports and eating well should be an individual’s duty to society rather than a habit for personal benefits. Do you agree or disagree? 坚持安康是个人关于社会的责任,但是,不是使个人受益的良好习惯,是承认同?

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  【安康类

  The government has the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe it is individuals’ responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 政府有责任保证人们的安康饮食,安康饮食是个人的责任,讨论两种观念,给出你的意见。

  作家立场:坚持安康是尽公民的社会责任,但是,更是关于个人有利的良好习惯。

  新东方网薛鹏思绪拓展

  为何坚持安康是尽到了社会责任:

  1. 个人坚持身体安康是个人实行社会责任的表现,因为个人减少了关于国度医疗资源的消耗。

  2. 假如个人的安康没有保证,难以保证工作的质量,工作的效率低,无法为社会做出应有贡献。相反,安康公民能够发明社会财富,为国度展开注入新颖生机。

  为何坚持安康是良好的个人习惯,关于个人有利:

  1. 关于个人的利好:增加悲观和自信,减少忧虑,人生态度愈加积极悲观。安康者通常为酷爱运动者,经过运动能够坚固好友,这就意味着快乐的源泉更多。

  2. 关于家庭的利好:能够想象,个人安康状况令人担忧,家人必然痛苦和担忧(例如企业家和文体明星),因而个人安康能够使人悲观地完成家庭的调和。

  3. 关于事业和学业的利好:个人安康能够进步学习和工作效率,使人肉体充沛地应对事业的应战。

薛鹏首创语料库安康是个人or社会责任

  新东方网薛鹏首创范文赏析

  首段:背景引见 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

  Health is to every individual what perfume is to flowers. However, people have been pondering, for many years, the significance of maintaining personal health without reaching any definite consensus, a popular belief is that personal health only serves the good of the community. As I see it, optimizing personal health could not only serve the good of the community,but more importantly,conduce to individual life, family harmony and career prosperity.

  {解析}:Health is to every individual what perfume is to flowers 安康关于每个人,好像花香关于花朵。

  {解析}:a popular belief is that ……一种盛行的观念就是……

  {解析}:optimizing personal health v 完善个人安康

  {解析}:conduce to individual life, family harmony and career prosperity v有助于个人生活,家庭和睦,事业辉煌

  二段:正方观念:为何坚持安康是尽到了社会责任

  Indeed, keeping fit could be of great benefits for a nation and therefore be deemed as the personal obligation to the community. In other words, As for the country,the increased proportion of wholesome citizens could greatly diminish the consumption in terms of the public medical treatment. Also, health indicates good mentality and vigorous physique. It is conceivable that the increase of healthy social citizens will create immense social value and thus inject new vitality into the further development of a nation.

  {解析}:could be of great benefits for a nation v关于国度有利好

  {解析}:The increased proportion of wholesome citizens could greatly diminish the consumption in terms of the public medical treatment. 安康公民的增加会减少社会公共医疗的消耗。

  {解析}:Health indicates good mentality and vigorous physique. 安康意味着健良好的心态和充沛的体能。

  {解析}:create immense social value and thus inject new vitality into the further development of a nation v 发明庞大的价值,为国度的展开注入新颖生机。

  三段:反方观念:为何坚持安康关于个人有利好:

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